1947 Earth

After Dil Se..., I wasn't sure I was in the mood for another depressing film. I didn't know much about Earth, but since it was directed by Deepa Mehta, I knew better than to expect anything for the faint of heart.

But I popped it in anyways--Truth was, I'd been dying to see it for quite some time now. For one, it stars Aamir Khan! Isn't that reason enough to watch a film?

Dil Se...

Let me first say that my prayers and thoughts are with all of those who have lost loved ones in the recent terror attacks on Mumbai. It's hard to watch a movie like "" at a time like this and not think of the horrible reality of hate crime and terrorism. I usually don't use this blog to post on anything other than straight film reviews, but I just wanted to let everybody know that I am posting this review and an upcoming review of "1947 Earth" without any intention of offending or glazing over something which rings horribly true for those who are living it. I'm sensitive to what you are going through, and although I am fortunate myself to have never been a victim of a terrorist attack, my heart goes out to all of you.

Secondly, I want to thank publicly and warmly my blog readers and newfound friends Summer and Katy for sending me this film as a present on their recent trip to Mumbai (thankfully, they were unharmed by the attacks). Along with I received 1947 Earth, Deewar, GolMaal, and Chotker Bali, so reviews on these films are forthcoming. Thanks again guys!

But onto . I was stumped for awhile on what to say about this film. It was quite a switch from the recently watched Main Hoon Na. Folks, if you're looking for a Shahrukh movie thats not your typical sugary song and dance, then is for you.

I'm used to watching love stories that make me feel good, a huge fan of rom-coms and heartwarmers such as Kuch Kuch Hota Hai. But was very much opposite. Yet it appealed to a different side of my heart, the side that understands the yearning and passion of love that isn't always good for you. The side that wants something it can't have and can't understand why. The side that believes there is a thin line between love and hate.

Rajneeti A lesson well unlearned!

Prakash Jha, a young talented director with limited resources, makes unforgettable Damool. Prakash Jha with some resources makes memorable Gangajal, Apaharan. Prakash Jha the rich director with unlimited resources makes at times mediocre Rajneeti...

I’m not going to get into the nitty gritty of relevance with Sonia Gandhi or references to Mahabharata. Rather I’ll focus on the art of storytelling, which is what cinema is all about.

Well almost all about.

First, regarding production values, there is a large troupe of well known actors, grand production design, thousands of extras, a huge canvas - all these attempted to give a local look and feel to the story. Unfortunately the camera which was capturing all this was not quite sure about the intention of Mr P Jha. The outcome is haphazard. At times the visuals are shaky, inadequate or with excessive bright lighting.

As a film maker I personally know how hard it is to manage even a tiny crew of creative brains. Prakash Jha has done that job very well. It’s a terrific job on his part to manage these many actors, extras, film crews and the passionate Indian crowds on locations. So kudos to him for that. But sadly cinema is not about managing people and getting the project done. What Rajneeti is missing is a beat, a heartbeat. In the midst of all this dark, dirty, and violent political mayhem Parakash has totally failed to capture the human emotions of pain, anger and trust - which in fact is his strength. Rather rich Prakash Jha relies on his fleet of expansive shiny cars and useless ‘not at all required’ kind of people in the background to portray the dirty story of mistrust, sabotage and backstabbing.

Quality acting is missing. I did not care for any of the characters. None of the actors - including the mighty but monotonous Nana Patekar - were able to provoke any emotions in me. It’s a plot driven script where actors were just doing their part and looking disinterested all the time. Ranbeer Kappor has somehow discovered a kind of smooth dialogue delivery and understated acting style post Rocket Singh which does not serve the purpose of this drama. I still believe Arjun Rampal should continue with modelling jeans and Nana Patekar with farming in Satara. Manoj Vajpaiee has funny facial expressions which look comical at times. Watch carefully for the few scenes in which he transforms into the legendary Dilip Kumar. Oh my god! SRK got the rights, didn’t it? Katrina never gets under the skin of her character past act two. Life is very hard on the other side of glamorous Bollywood. Welcome Katrina. Watch her walking in a saree.

Apart from mediocre acting, rich director’s poor direction and all-over- the-place cinematography and loose editing Rajneeti also offers us a dark maroon blood ( yaar khoon to sahi istemal karo?) fleet of shiny cars, a uniformed army of body guards, pointless shootouts and an omnipresent Indian media.

In short Rajneeti is a must watch movie for those who want to learn how not to make a bad movie, though the great army of Indian cinema goers have turned this small film into a big success. The first week’s revenues are far better then some of the well-researched, well-planned, waste-of-time ho-hum features from Down Under.
Well, ladies and gentleman, welcome to the world where 200 million people have 400 million reasons to watch a movie. It is a democracy after all!!

Thanks for reading. See you next time.

Film Funding, FTO and all that...

I've applied for EFF (emerging film maker fund) 3 times and good news is i've been rejected all the three times! I've tried different scripts, different budget, different crew, actors etc..but no luck so far..then you watch the film made through this fund and I'm quite surprised at the benchmarks used to decide the finalists...well I'm not trying to say that grapes are sour, but answer lies in Australian Film Industry...and films made here..

I love the Bollywood structure where there is no 300 pages applications and gate keepers and frustrations and the mediocre outcomes.. creativity is one thing and popularity is another. FTO has decided to keep audiences out of theaters.

let's face it Australia does not have any industry, or audiences as we have not master the art of going solo with freedom and still we heavily rely on gate keepers and mediocrity top up with I'm great attitude..the hypocrisy in film circles does not tell people that their films are worst and they don't have story...or a film for that matter...all is well...anyway, lets hope one day..now something creative:

following statement I've submitted as director's statement:

Director’s Statement

“Dinner with Nikhil” is a humorous take on two different cultures and their cultural differences. The film is about an over confident Indian guy and his survival tactics in the world unknown to him. The protagonist Nikhil is a street smart individual who wants to be successful at any cost in all aspects of life in a foreign country including a relationship with a white Australian girl. This film takes a mildly ironic look at the postcolonial mentality and competitiveness of Indians (where they must look successful in career, status and achievements by any means possible) in stark contrast to their easygoing egalitarian Australian counterparts. “Dinner with Nikhil” is also a story about a contemporary Australian girl and her casual but ambitious attitude towards life and relationships. Sarah Marsh too has big dreams and wants to meet a tall dark handsome, and preferably wealthy, man. When she is attracted to Nikhil, who seems to fulfil her criteria, she unknowingly enters a world which is bit more spicy, colourful and traditional than hers. How will Nikhil and Sarah respond to each other’s different habits values, beliefs? This is the source of the comedy. ‘Dinner With Nikhil’ also addresses the conditions of young Indian like the waiters Vinay and Shashank in Australian society where the sexual mores are starkly different from those in India . There are many interesting characters in the film that provide comical moments through their mannerisms and their perspective on the Australian way of life. In a nutshell this is a simple romantic comedy with funny complex characters.

STORY STRUCTURE

This is a visual film, where less dialogue and more action is the key element of story structure. Comedy of errors and farcical moment drives the narrative of the film. Indian accent, use of colloquial English words, different structure of sentences makes this screenplay very interesting for the Australian audience e.g. when Nikhil asks Sara “what is your line of business?” a common question in India but very alien for an Australian girl.

CINEMATIC THEME AND STYLE

I’m aiming to shoot this film in a TV journalism style – part mockumentary, part Bollywood pastiche. The film is introduced through the eyes of the Indian TV reporter Kapil and his Aussie cameraman Bruce. This third person perspective will provide a unique cinematic dimension as a ‘film within a film’. What we want to integrate here is a combination of “reporting from location” with traditional cinematic story telling, to make the audience’s perspective and viewing experience more interesting. The collages of events (Nikhil picking up a plant from a strange house, Gunduswami’s introduction scenes etc.) will add to the overall humour of the film. The second subtle but important cinematic element is the use of colours. The Indian culture and way of life are very colourful. I want to explore and compare these aspects of two cultures this in the film – the relatively drab suburban experience of living in rented units in Parramatta and Harris Park contrasts with the Indian community’s more flamboyant world. The clothes, the food, the kites, and the red cricket ball -almost everything which relate to Nikhil - are bright loud and even garish. Sarah’s world is different - dark and somewhat stark Western Suburbs grit. When these two cinematic themes combine with Bollywood music, dance numbers and constant chattering, there will be create a lively prism of different moods through out the journey of the film.

CHARACTERS

The characters of this film are real characters based largely on my own experience. We’ve got an over confident Indian guy, a snooty Ausse Girl, the ex Indian army cook, two eccentric Indian students making for a sub-continent version of Fawlty Towers. They all have very interesting backstories. Nikhil is a man with a mission to do well in his new country to justify his father’s support back in the post office at Maniagar. Sarah has her own priorities – an aspirational Western suburbs girl who is looking for a way out of her humdrum, out-of-work situation. Gunduswami is a symbol of Raj Days from colonial India in Bangalore. Mix and match of personalities makes this simple story a very interesting film. I want to concentrate on the experience and understanding of the character, rather than telling actors how to act. The boot camp at the end of rehearsal schedule will give all actors a real life experience of working in an Indian restaurant and living the student life.

SCRIPT AND DIALOGUE

the story for this film has came from my own experiences as a migrant struggling to settle down in the unknown world of Parramatta, make a career and start a family. Being born and brought up in India, I was fascinated by the idea of comparing cultural differences and ways of thinking. I’ve tried to portray this in a humorous way in this film. My co-writer, Jack Douglas, as a resident of Macarthur, has contributed the other side of story. We have worked through the concept with lots of brainstorming for four to five months and it has been well received by the actors, the production crew and sample audience readers.

The actors have provided sound feedback given they are very familiar with the worlds portrayed.

WHY I WANT TO SHOOT THIS FILM

I want to portray ‘multicultural Australia’ from a uniquely Indian perspective and show how this amazing country is home to so many different, and at times conflicting, cultural currents. This film will be an entertaining contribution to the ongoing and increasingly strong interaction (not just in cricket) between our two nations.

Parth Nanavati

My Name is Khan: Emotions in motion.

SRK aka king Khan, Karan Johr, Kajol in second innings, I was bit sceptical, as from my own experiences I’ve seen that lots of hype is not a necessarily a healthy thing. But the K-team (Khan, Kajol, and Karan) has lived up to the expectations, (at least of the masses)
My name is Khan is a smart script, it’s blend of Hollywood three-act structure with typical Indian love story minus Karava-choth, and wedding songs. Karan is matured in terms of screen play/ script writing. He successfully awakens the emotions of common people. I bet lots of wet handkerchiefs in Indian theatres!
There were few post 9/11 films came and gone, but what different in MNK is, the post 9/11 atrocities stays in background without getting loud and making film boring. Lover boy SRK travels back and forth between real world and surreal world.

Here are the highlights of the script.

• Journey of protagonist to achieve his goal. (Straight from Hollywood’s formula)
• Make protagonist miserable (Asperger’s syndrome) to gain sympathy from the audience (Thankfully those extended dance sequences are out of equation)
• Concept of Hero: where a Hero helps to save the world, lives and comes out as winner in the end. (Hurricane in Georgia)
• It’s all about SRK: This script is specifically written keeping SRK in mind, and nothing wrong in it, but I do believe that good scripts are characters based and not actor based. An actor should be able to slip in to the character not the other way round.
• Influence of western cinema is flashing/flagging in this script, starting from three act formula structure to the story idea, cinematography, back ground score and so on. I hope this does not a step forward to loosing originality of art of story telling the Indian way!

SRK is brilliant as Mr Khan, Kajol welcome back, still I’m not big fan of your voice culture, but it does not matter. Jimmy is OK, so are the others. Many Hollywood actors got important roles - a new beginning in terms of collaboration between two giants of cinema.

Direction I’m sorry but too predictable, Karan tried hard and he is successful to some extent in awakening feelings in the audience’s minds, but nothing outstanding. A typical Bollywood job if I must say. Sometimes I wonder why they don’t dare to be different, do you have to have dialogues for everything, can’t you few emotions without saying? Do you have to have a fat lady in your film as good omen ( and for that matter few other irrelevant characters such as Dr. Rahman just to prove a point)? Do you really have to stab protagonist and then show him in and out of death? Do you have to take inspiration from Forrest Gump including mannerisms of Tom Hanks? I personally know this is very hard for a director not to indulge in to the stereotypes but at Karan Johr’s level, he can afford it I suppose.

Music good. Cinematography and VFX are cool. American landscape has been captured luxuriously. Editing could be tighter.

The film grabs and looses the viewer few times. At times melodramatic and loud at times really strong. In short it’s not gripping from beginning to the end. SRK carries film on his shoulder throughout and saves the day in the end.

My Rating: Three and Half/ Five.

A Script..

My relationship with creative arts is kinda love hate, at times i hate to write, or create anything. At times I just indulge and immerse myself passionately in to creative processes.

the script posted here was written on the date and mood i can't remember, but I'm sure after watching Quentin Tarantino movies for a week i cameup with the idea of this mystery plot.

Have a read...

EXT. A QUITE PARK. DAY

it's an early morning. the bicentennial park is not
crowded yet. the air is chilly suggesting that the winter
is at the door step. it is also a windy day, tree tops
are dancing at the tunes of wind. somewhere in this quite
park a woman is knitting something from her yarn. she is
also humming along suggesting that she is very happy,
content and productive in whatever she is doing.
camera slowly retracts after establishing an early
morning, a quite park and a knitting lady.
in the next shot, which starts at the entrance of
bicentennial we can see an elegant and sophisticated old
man coming out of his car. he is elderly but agile. the
old man is dressed in three piece suit. he also has a
smoking pipe in his mouth, a golden watch in his pocket
and walking stick in his hand. The old man also has a
packet in his underarm. he locks his car and quickly
looks at the time. he briskly starts walking towards the
bench, where that knitting lady is still busy knitting
and humming.
the scene end here with wide shot, where we can see an
old man walking towards the lady in a quite park.
INT. KITCHEN. DAY
The scene starts with a close up a frying pen, somebody
breaks an egg in to the frying pan and camera slowly
zooms out. Now, we can see that a young lady is preparing
break fast, the camera does a haphazard reconnaissance of
kitchen. apart from messy kitchen wares what stand out is
the photograph of humming lady in a frame, on the top of
refrigerator. a man is his thirties walks in to the
frame, opens the door of freeze and gets a bottle of
juice out. he is in pajamas. he looks at the young lady,
who is bit conscious of the presence of the young man.
the young man, grabs the lady from behind and start
kissing on her neck. she tries to get way from man but
unsuccessfully. camera moves out the kitchen with gentle
moaning sounds in back ground. in the last of this scene
we can see that an retarded teen ager is laughing
violently while playing play station in the lounge room
of the same house. he has blood all over his shirt and a
slit in his wrist. camera also takes a quick note of a
disposable razor next to him.
fade out.

INT. BEDROOM. DAY

A heavily pregnant teenager girl is laying on her back
on the bed. she is starring at the ceiling. she looks
really depressed. she turns on her side after a while and
gets the coke powder out of her beg, grabs the framed
picture frame of the old man, who we have seen in the
park. she puts the powder on the frame and start
sniffing. we can see that she is on high and her mobile
is buzzing with a name on it, Rick calling. after a while
she stops drug abuse and runs to the toilet, the door
closes, we can hear flush of water. she comes out, picks
up the picture frame stares at it, and then starts
kissing the frame. after a little while she is crying,
with the same frame in her hands. in the last shot we can
see the saliva dropping on the frame. a close up of the
old man smiling in the photograph. camera leaves the
room.

EXT. BUSY STREET. DAY

Another old man, starkly opposite in appearance and
clothing then the old man we have seen in the first scene
is seen pushing a shopping trolley on the street of
kogarah. the trolley is full of all the imaginable
rubbish in it. this a moving home of the old man. she
picks up rages from the garbage bin. He is dirty, filthy
and melancholiac. the saliva is dripping from the corner
of his mouth. he parks the trolley at the end of the
street, sits next to the trolley on the ground. the train
passes by in the back ground. he grabs his wallet and
stares at the picture of the lady. we can hear the
humming of the lady in the park in the back ground. it's
her photograph though she is few years older now.the old
man neatly combs his hair, takes a pack of disposable
razor out of the trolley. hides the trolley and walks way
from the camera. the scene ends with another train
passing by.


EXT. A QUITE PARK. DAY

Camera is back to the park. however things have changed a
little bit now. the first shot is out of focus, with a
somebody is gulping from air in back ground. when camera
gets in to the focus we can see that the knitting lady is
off the bench, on the ground. the needle is in her
throat, and blood is flowing freely. she is dying and
gasping for air. camera without showing any sympathy
moves to the other end of park. it find the old man in
three pice suit on the ground with smashed face. the
packet next to him has a framed photograph in it. we can
see only half of the photo with old man in suit and
knitting lady. there is a hand around the shoulder of
knitting lady. a man's hand! the camera moves away
quickly from the crime scene. we can hear noise of
ambulance in the back ground.
EXT. STREET. DAY
the dirty old man is walking on the street with his
shopping trolley. soon after establishing this we can see
the young lady who was preparing break fast in second
scene is walking behind him. they don't notice each other
and keeps walking. the camera zooms in on the traffic
light which changes from amber to red.

finis

copyright- parth nanavati 2010